my Anzac story with me in it

my class and I have been writing some story's of how we think the war went including us in it and this is what it says.

April the 25th,1915

boom smash I could hear the turks firing their guns getting ready to fight. next minute everyone starts to get into row boats when it was my turn to climb down I could feel the hard ,rough, and wobbly rope ladder  next minute we start rowing the row boats. my boat stopped halfway to the shore so we got out into freezing cold water.                

when we got to shore I was nearly as cold  as Ice and all I could smell was the mix of gunpowder and the salt water and also the smell of smoke covering the place.  there where the Turks fighting and firing their guns at us finally I got my gun ready so I started  firing at them. I have killed 3 allready so I am doing great I was still quite cold from hopping into the water.

I could hear the crashing and banging and don't forget the screaming from all the solders that were being killed so I just ignored the  distraction that I am heard.  I just kept firing and look I killed 10 more that is a good start all right I can still hear the screaming of my friends being killed.  

after a few days later all I could smell was rotting dead bodies.

then we started the war again this time I was not doing well I dodged a bullet that nearly got me and then I dodged another one and that time it hit my friend behind me.

The announcement came that the war was over and we had won.  On the way home i was feeling sad because most of my friends had died.  Feeling exhausted, but lucky to be alive and be home with my family.

The End   by Tia